gradually strolls on my soul
its fierce, harsh and cold
grasps ma heart squeezes out
hope that i hoped wud last out
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This touched me. If a person has ever experianced simular feelings, they will appreciate it as well. I read your comment on the forum that you think your poems are childlike. I don't think they are. I like them very much.
Deep feelings of sadness expressed in good diction from the heart. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Abdul.