Saturday, December 29, 2012

Fear Comments

Rating: 3.8

Fear
Fear wraps you up but doesn't comfort you.
Fear makes you feel sick and bring up what you shouldn't really say.
Fear is heavy and holds you back.
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Lucy Grainger
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Chinedu Dike 10 November 2014

Fear is usually your imagination of sinister things playing tricks in your mind, it has no substance, thanks why on standing up to fear we usually find it inconsequential. A lovely poem, well articulated and penned with insight. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Khairul Ahsan 28 December 2013

'Fear is heavy and holds you back.' -This line is the best of all. 'Fear is creative and makes you act in a way you wouldn't normally.' - Really?

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Titi Dale 05 February 2013

Wow in a dictionary this should be fear's definition :) well done! A great write: D

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Unwritten Soul 13 January 2013

If you surrender your hope to a fear you will lose it, if you give it to spirit it will double it_Soul

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Sandy Player 13 January 2013

i like the way you played the comparisons a little further. the observational stance gives the poem a slight chill to the reader. tis not bad methinks

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Vijay Sai R 12 January 2013

well knitted poetry on fear

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Howard Johnson 29 December 2012

A pleasure to read thank you for sharing

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