Spreads through the body
Like blood in water
And a chill goes through your
Spine
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Funny I have a peom kinda like that....cant remember if its under the same name or not....but anyways...you discribed what I use to feel....you paint it so real...nice work.
That's really strong, powerful writing. The images are excellently chosen too; blood through wateras the 1st especially, it shows the reader where the poem is heading. Great stuff-M