Sunday, March 18, 2012

Fear Comments

Rating: 4.0

Shadows in the dark
They're keeping me awake
So I sleep with the light on
Please lock the door behind you
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Tiana Webb
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Chinedu Dike 18 May 2015

Fear is a bunch of sinister shadows. A shadow has no substance, it's only a magnified reflection of something small, that's why in facing fear squarely we usually find it inconsequential. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Muzaffer Akin 26 June 2014

Congratulations...I like it very much.

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Michelle Claus 26 June 2014

The final two lines make me curious - Who is the *you* whom the poet fears? This one word sends my mind into back-story, conjuring reasons for the poet's nightmares.

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Colleen Courtney 26 June 2014

Love the line, silence can be deadly, especially at night! Nicely written poem!

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Leslie Philibert 26 June 2014

Good work, the theme not new, but well written

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Malini Kadir 28 June 2012

how true, .........death....in nightmares can really frighten daylights from you......

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Malini Kadir 28 June 2012

how true, .........death....in nightmares can really frighten daylights from you......

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Kaila George 27 June 2012

Dont you hate it when Fear stops in your tracks....very true when it comes to this one word...Its a delicate subject and your wrote it beautiful...thanks for the share.

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Besa Dede 26 June 2012

Good narration :)) Regards, ~Besa

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Shouvik Roy 26 June 2012

Wow, wonderful portrayal of an acute emotion..great write.. :)

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Alafe Ramat 26 June 2012

Whao! ...dt's so amazing..lv ow u tel abt d tale...grt work

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Pranab K Chakraborty 26 June 2012

Fantastic the finishing hit. Smooth the speed to touch its catastrophe. Nice.

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