Saturday, August 20, 2011

Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

The amorphous clouds threaten the Sun
of stealing its peace and shine;
but the Sun never doubts its strength
and it never whines.
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Anshul Gupta
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Allemagne Roßmann 22 August 2011

Enjoyed the rhythm of fear very poignant lines here.Good job.

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Sd Tiwari 20 August 2011

A nice poem. But I feel fear is also necessary to avoid rebellious situatiion. I give full marks. Keep it up.

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Anshul Gupta

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