Monday, October 5, 2009

Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

...glazing over my life
like sheets of ice
melting me before pelting me
with harrowing insights.
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I write because I have to
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 October 2009

The Socratics of inner-affliction is abstruse, yet philosophically true-to-life, and the inevitable of Life is that with breath comes fear....the only variance is to what degree we allow ''fear'' to house itself within our psyche.This piece ventelates a mellifluous rhyme/rhythm scheme...Commendable overall craftsmanship.. F j R

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Tai Chi Italy 07 October 2009

The deeper we go, the more fearful we become, but we see the light eventually. Great write Smiling at you Tai

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