Saturday, April 18, 2009

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You said I have no fear, that I do not fear you
You gave me that smile that confuses me so
You lock your lips on mine and caressed me
And my body responded to you like it has a mind of its own.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 22 April 2009

I suppose that one day you might write something that I don't find compelling, moving, and with that tingle factor - but you haven't done it with this one! Keep 'em coming June.

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Scarlette Romero 19 April 2009

That is a very beautiful poem.^_^

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