Fear Comments
Fear loses when I am close to you,
when I forget about what is loneliness,
but lately you are the one I fear,
now the world is my nightmare.
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the flow and sequence is perfect as well as the emotion
It is a wonderful poem, I was drowning between the lines really. Keep writing.
Great poem! I do believe that 'lonelyness, ' should be spelled, 'loneliness'. Yes-My spell checker has confirmed it. Always happy to help! God bless us all-MJG.
Your poems are extremely passionate and direct. In spite of the fears and the darkness, they are bursting with life!
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7/21/2025 10:50:54 AM # 1.0.0
fearing nightmares and realities both...face the realities strongwilled...there won't be any more nightmares... emotional write... it expresses the confused mind very well...10