Fear Comments

so many years. so many fears. so many tears.lovely poem to be gifted with...10 no to shed tears for the want of fears it shall not bear life shouldn't go out of gear one may definitely hear when some one says O, dear come close and so near I may speak your future is not bleak you are on highest peak so to say you are not weak You will go on for weeks i may confide and seek but you don't weep promises always keep read mine....cry not

so many years. so many fears. so many tears....lovely poem to be gifted with 10 no to shed tears for the want of fears it shall not bear life shouldn't go out of gear one may definitely hear when some one says O, dear come close and so near I may speak your future is not bleak you are on highest peak so to say you are not weak You will go on for weeks i may confide and seek but you don't weep promises always keep read mine...cry not

We need the bravery. We must fire the slavery. Wise Girl! a great content defies all obstacles! ! ! that's our life full of fears from the mysteries, from the Future... that's our life full of fears from the wounds, from the Past... that's our life we have to unveil the mysteries and remedy the wounds in the Present, it's our chance to do that NOW! ! ! the Braves believe in their inner STRENGTH! ! ! a Brave 10/ Thanks For Sharing Your FEARS

Very meaningful write. We must keep fighting our fears.

i adore this piece.. actually, i added it to my poem list.. please, let me know about your new piece.. keep writing..

thats right. you are talented keep up

YES, very pure Merna this all we need to learn... that we can face ourselves clearly and prouldly when against a mirror 10

such a beautifull poem, what else can i say...(bssara7a keda, GAMDA! ! !)

ahh another good onw with a power packed subject love it good work

Simple words with a strong subject..good poem10

to be hones twith tradition, lovely............. Appriciation

wonderful poem by a wonderful poet. omar ibrahim(cairo-EGYPT)

thank you all! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! thanks a lot...... Merna

really dear in this poem every single words meaning like a poems.........here all words meaning a lot....and great poem from you thanks

Great great poem, strong words built in between repeatition of phrases...eloquently penned...10/10

strong words dear friend....very strong....nice poem Nia ___________________________________________________________________________

A very inspirational poem Merna...........You have described the true essence of feaf with simple yet sound words and then the way you have twisted your poem in the second half showing the encouragement and convincing the feared ones to try and erase their agony and reassemble themselves for only then they can walk away easily through fear..........One should really muster up some courage considering the messega conveyed in this poem.......10

Persevering through pain and fighting the that foe called fear is never easy.Thanks for showing the way. Let us walk it even if it means mounting the mountain every day. Well written.

Fear is a precursor to disaster.So fear you not Merna.Nice piece.

Aisha is right. Very natural verses pertaining forceful words. Keep it up Merna!