Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

i pressed my knees
against the chest
hard and harder
the hold of my hands
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Tarun Sharma
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Anjali Sinha 20 December 2008

fear, fear--what is fear? Did you know that when you were born you had only 2 inbuilt fears. A fear of falling and a fear of loud noises.These fears were built into your DNA and passed from generation to generation as survival mechanism. whatever a great write Tarun. Keep sharing -10 anjali

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Chitra - 15 December 2008

thought stirring fear is a mind game...the only to win is to face it clear the talus of insecurity

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C T Heart 14 December 2008

Fear is the darkness that clouds our mind and taking control our ways, putting us in a narrow space... let not this fear totally absorb us, eat us. Great determination and strenght needs to overcome this fear. Beautiful theme penned by a well crafted mind....a 10/10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 December 2008

let fear be assailed by the myth of mind mother`s divine bliss when pledged to protect her blood, wonderful thoght as expressed by the imagery, man only needs ther courage to face the challenges well penned,10+, thanks

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C. P. Sharma 14 December 2008

Tarun, You touched upon a really noble theme. The violence in all its forms is based on mutual fears. You organised the theme very well. Just a little bit of polishing of expressions at few places can make it shine more. CP

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