Fear Comments

Deeply poignant and moving poem. Fear and darkness are vividly captured in this marvelous write

' Yet shall I struggle in the dark for breath? Will no one fight the Terror for my sake, ' - So touching. She feels so alone, defenseless, hopeless. ' The heavy darkness that no dawn will break? How can they leave me in that dark alone, Who loved the joy of light and warmth so much, '

My tastes like eggs

The poem is so mwaaah I like it

A surprise ending nice poem! Childhood fears mingled with a sick woman's who doesn't like to die!

How can they shut me under a stone? - Opt for cremation! Feed the soil and the plants with your ashes. A beutiful poem to say the least--- Peace-