Friday, April 20, 2012

Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

Paralysis like the bite of a viper
Without mercy
Holds you prisoner
And traps you in its web
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Mary Mc Creath 10 July 2012

Very well written you have expressed fear in a very deep way that makes me see it as something very poisoning to a persons system. Thank you for sharing this. Mary.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 14 June 2012

its has got different images...that suited themselves into narrating how fear truly conquers our wisdom

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Romeo Della Valle 29 April 2012

WELCOME! To the Poetry World! Your poetic talent is clearly shown in this well crafted and poignant write that is full of rich words and imagery! FEAR, a terrifying word that has being haunting the human race for centuries! However, Fear can always be overcome in many rational ways! Everybody find his or her own way, mainly through a spiritual mean! 10+++ Thank you for sharing this beautiful write and keep it up! I just posted one titled: Fears Not More, check it out when time permits! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Pheko Motaung 21 April 2012

Great and wonderful poem.Keep the spirit high

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