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poem is good i like it............

entrapped there on the beach... like the fly in the web! awesome! the idea that appeals is that it is unique! ! ! i opened the random poem and it came out to be a fabulously awesome! ! ! good work marm...

intense. the poem flows beautifully with the crashing waves.

Wow, this beach scene is a great way of putting out this message. I see it so vividly.