Thursday, January 10, 2008

Fear Comments

Rating: 4.3

fear fear fear your not my friend
fear fear fear you are the end
fear fear fear will you ever cease?
fear will consume
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Gold Fish 13 November 2008

Goldfish & her fellow colleague do believe this poem is the bombdiggity. We do like the repetition of the word fear, but we need more meaning, like, how is fear feeling. What does fear think of your opinion. Please take this to heart, Thankyou Miss Hohensee.

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Jeannie Ann Clark 10 January 2008

Firm expressions...keep writing...you may enjoy some of my writings..thank you.

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