Sunday, April 13, 2008

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My wrists are empty,
no more blood to bleed out
my body is pale,
no more light warms the skin
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Thomas Spencer
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Kimberley Logan 19 April 2008

i adore the last line of the poem..

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Wow. This is really good! It is really sad though. Keep up the good work! ! ! ~Sunshine ♥

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 April 2008

very interesting..........nice write

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Amy S 13 April 2008

I think this one is.... actaully I can't think of a word to describe wow much i liked it! I know what you mean, but you can get through it. <33

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Camilla Ghosh 13 April 2008

Cleverly done. I like the ending. Keep writing

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