Monday, January 13, 2003

Fawn Ghazal Comments

Rating: 3.3

Inside a snowy blanket which put the trees to sleep,
I heard a fawn.
Out past the window's ice coat in the morning, I
found a sleeping fawn.
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M Asim Nehal 06 February 2019

Outstanding Ghazal. Mesmerised with every word of it.

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Hashem S 27 March 2014

Very beautiful indeed!

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Connie Marcum Wong 26 March 2014

I am so glad to have found this charming poem being featured here. I am giving it a # 10 because I was touched by it. Blessings and Aloha

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Michael Morgan 26 March 2012

This is a very nice poem, I think, and deserves a much higher rating than given. Very engaging.

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