Sunday, December 14, 2014

Favour Of God Comments

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Their path so smooth.
Their destination so near;
But I tread path much crude.
My destination so unclear.
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Md. Asadullah
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Valsa George 15 December 2014

God's love is discerned only by a devotee, as water is relished only by those who are thirsty! What seems bitter to others may be sweet to a seeker of God as his eyes are glued to the final destination...! A poem of profound thoughts!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 December 2014

well effort like petition or supplication O God! I am so grateful to you; For your favour on me. Sweetness of water is known; But to only a man thirsty. thank you :)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 December 2014

well effort like petition or supplication O God! I am so grateful to you; For your favour on me. Sweetness of water is known; But to only a man thirsty. thank you :)

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Savita Tyagi 14 December 2014

Nice work. Loved the last lines.

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