Life gives us many things
but we count the things
not given to us.
Is it not a faux pas?
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A poem well conceived. life a faux pas! A noble message to live a life of truth and non-violence.
Indeed it is, you highlighted hypocrisy very nicely. I see a satire in your poems.5****
Beautifully evoked. A poem of wisdom and truth, showing the path to contentment.
A brilliant narration of the weaknesses of humanity. A great poem imbued with insight and wisdom as always. Top marks! ! !