Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Fauna's Lost And Found! Comments

Rating: 4.6

To purses of leather
one lost its skin
One lost its feather
to hats and decors
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Mohammad Younus 30 April 2023

You have gorgeously highlighted man's cruelty towards innocent animals.

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Bri Edwards 23 February 2023

...a five-star rating that is.

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Bri Edwards 23 February 2023

This poem's topic MAY be somewhat 'dated' now,10 years later; I don't know. For its value as a poem, and for the sake of giving it a boost to be read by more, I give it a 5.

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Bri Edwards 23 February 2023

'And how do you restore life to the poor dead fauna As long as poaching is rife Relax not in beach or sauna.' Well, you DON'T. You cleverly formed a catchy rhyme; I liked it. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 21 August 2022

There's much I could say about the poem and the topic, some of it is not 'flattering'. But I choose to not comment here. If someone wants my thoughts, ASK. bri : )

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Brook Renwick 05 April 2022

I believe that animals are communicating with each other on a different wave length - non verbal unlike we do with words.

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

if only, if only, if only---our earth is too full of if only---too many cruel and thoughtless people run the businesses

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Dave SmithWhite 04 October 2021

Well written, apt and important statement about the horrible ongoing destruction of our planet by the arbiters of fashion and commerce. Well done! Cheers from Sydney, Dave SW

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 August 2021

Powerfully worded, such A beautiful poem, about the death of world's most precious animals. You nailed the spikes on the heads, dear poetess! Excellent!

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 August 2021

A most pertinent subject. Very powerful and persuasive words.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 July 2021

The exploitation of animals is tragic.

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Leslie Ledoux 05 July 2021

I really appreciate the insight you display. Awesome use of expression.

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Chinedu Dike 28 June 2021

Really an insightful piece of poetry set aside for deep reflective thought. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Shakira Nandini 25 June 2021

The way you have awakened consciousness in poetry full of feeling. I have no words. Wonderful

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Terry Craddock 09 September 2020

Nothing Left But Extinction Bones Dug Up From Dust the loss in extinction level predation is bad slow bleed species level sterilization unique irreplaceable creation rendered desolation dust ash life possibilities suspended... Inspired by the poem 'Fauna's Lost And Found! ' by the poet s.zaynab kamoonpuri. Dedicated to the poet s.zaynab kamoonpuri.

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Terry Craddock 05 September 2020

the loss in extinction level predation, is slow bleed species level sterilization, unique irreplaceable creation rendered desolation dust ash

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Leeann Azzopardi 30 May 2020

This would be ideal. But the realisation is the natives have their tradations. They know when and how much. The rest of us should do everything in our power not letting these animals perish. Bravo! Encore! Please read and comment on my latest

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Keith Brown 04 May 2020

They lose, we lose not many can tell you how a lion tastes, or an elephant but to the shooter they all taste of money! Well written poem

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A B Faniki 01 September 2019

A well versed poem dat contain heartfelt message.Thanks for sharin such thoughtful n beautiful poem

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2019

3 – And " poachers" ? some may eat their prey, or at least make good use of animal parts. and money received supports them. an animal lover? ok, that's alright. it IS a devisive issue, for sure. bri :) nicely done. to MyPoemList Oh, I commented 2 years ago! ! p.s. i'm neither an " animal lover" nor " a hunter" .

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