Sunday, April 3, 2016

Faulty Plumbing Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you move aside the false wall
And lift up the boards to reveal the access
(Assuming you're of the right shape and size)
You can crawl down under the church
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Mike Smith
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2017

Leaving the murk and the filth behind to be challenged again at a later date. This is an amazing poem brilliantly penned after observing water stream. Brilliant view is presented...10

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Pamela Sinicrope 26 May 2016

Again, you kept me reading. You're a storyteller! Hmmmm. so what happens next? I'm dying here, waiting to find out. What next? ;)

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Mihaela Pirjol 05 April 2016

A quite unexpected read...I like this little story.

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Kelly Kurt 03 April 2016

Hey! The shape and size thing was....Funny.: -) You emerged a bit dusty but appreciated. The recounting is appreciated too

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Mike Smith 03 April 2016

I'm still very childlike in my true love for getting dirty. For some reason, it appeals to me

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Kim Barney 03 April 2016

Sounds like a true story, and an interesting one at that. I'll be waiting for the sequel.

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Mike Smith 03 April 2016

True yes, interesting... Maybe. Hopefully the sequel will entail a solution

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