Thursday, May 4, 2023

Faultsville Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Faultsville---Still building':
That is our city's slogan.

In this site that Fate gave us,
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Denis Mair
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M. Asim Nehal 14 May 2023

Work under progress is what life is all about and your poem reminds me It remains like that till the end, never complete. Thoughtful poem.

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A very interesting , thought provoking and thoughtful poem. Liked the penultimate stanza. Beautifully expressed and presented.

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Juhaina Tumlu 05 May 2023

Very interesting poem.

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