Thursday, September 17, 2009

Fault Line Breaking Comments

Rating: 4.5

Today marks a continuation of
my blazing accent of enlightenment.
With a tedious eye I vanquish
the demon taunting my peripheral
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Rani Turton 17 September 2009

Many memorable phrases in this finely written poem. Thanks.

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Jean Dament 17 September 2009

An enjoyable poem about the struggle of living life. Well written. Thanks for sharing. Ravensong

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John Weber

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