Saturday, April 9, 2005

Fatuous Angel! Comments

Rating: 4.9

So sweet; so innocent, the child of heaven
Fallen into revulsion, called Earth
Calling out to the depraved to love
And be loved
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Lynette Dias Gouveia
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Permanent Daylight 06 June 2007

hello, i really loved this: the frustration and the helplessness, all contained in this piece of writing.

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Permanent Daylight 06 June 2007

hello, i really loved this: the frustration and the helplessness, all contained in this piece of writing.

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Ivy Christou 30 September 2005

I liked this a lot. it tells a lot about the cruel world we live in and the loss of hope. Great write! HBH

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Lare Austin 09 April 2005

Hi Lynette...wow...this is very well done...very powerful...I felt very much the frustration you have proclaimed here...you have a very precise and neat style in this poem...very well done... Lare

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Lori Messenger 09 April 2005

I enjoyed this poem very much Lynette.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 09 April 2005

This is a great poem! Gee, I was siting at the adge of my seat. It is so well done and says so much and it is all sad but true. Thank you. H

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