Fatty Bum Bum Comments

Honestly i cant compensate the amount of life that this beautiful heart felt poem has done to me. It has changed me to become a better man and stop praying to minions. I will now go on a endless journey to find out the meaning of life and this poem will fuel my potential

Hi there Tom, you are onto something special here, I know this so I will be looking...Bless. and keep up the great work.

Hi Tom, A beautiful poem on submission. You are honest about your goal and you have told it openly in this poem. A good write!

Nice catchy title. Loved your poem of honesty. Very revealing and honest.

Your poem makes us chuckle, and we also empathize.

Cute and I like the repeated last line of each stanza. Very nicely done.

Wonderfully amusing poem. A light heart will sure take couple of ounces away from my fat! Thank you for sharing.

I wish you the best of luck in your honest efforts and hope to see another poem from you one day soon, which you have named, just Call Me Slim!

Witty write indeed. If you like modern poetry you may enjoy my work, which has recently been published in magazines in the US and Canada

Really modern and up-to- date

And here I thought I was yhe only one.

I like the +ve outlook in this poem...

Great poem! Well done! Feel free to read my poem titled Willpower, I know how hard it is x All the best!

Beautiful poem. Beautifully written. Great contents. You can do it. Wish you the best.

I like this poem and i could relate to what you're talking about. i am trying to do the exercise thing myself, but it is definitely not easy.

I like this poem, and i could relate to what you're talking about. I'm trying to do the exercise thing myself, but boy, it is not easy and that's honest (smile) .

This poem put a smile on my face. You made it funny while you were owning up to what you have done. Luv it X

Wow..I love this one Tom, you've made me laugh! !

Good for you, you owned up as you wrote up, now your going to tone up.

I have to admit, I really cheesed off the doctor when in hospital recently. They suspected (Wrongly - Hooray!) something unnecessarily unpleasant. Have you lost any weight recently, Mr O'Neill? No idea, I never weigh myself. Ooh! she said. Go to the Phillipines. I said. End smile.