Saturday, December 7, 2013

Fatigued I Comments

Rating: 4.5

When I finish
all my tasks,
fatigued I
want to keep
...
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Neela Nath Das
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Khairul Ahsan 15 February 2014

It's a wonderful poem, so relaxing, releasing and soothing! 'Under the Mistletoe tree I wanna sleep, on your chest, my dear Nature I'll take breath deep! ' - These lines evoked very soothing feelings in me. Nice poem.

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Babatunde Aremu 09 December 2013

What a beautiful poem about nature! Nicely written

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Kanav Justa 08 December 2013

, , , it would feel great to sleep in nature's lap... a nice write

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Gajanan Mishra 07 December 2013

good write, thanks, I like it.

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