Saturday, June 6, 2020

Fatigued I Look To Bed Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fatigued I look to bed
And it is always there hungered
For me to rest and hold
In its bosom like a bosom friend
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2020

A very unique and wonderful description of a bed. Poignant yet so true. Like a true friend that is always there to lend a helping hand. " It is like heaven or " . Very contemplating line. Marvelous poem so well written as always.

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As always your review comes like refreshing shower for me Rose Marie....I am truly humbled...many thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 June 2020

A well composed poem. Simply excellent....10+++

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Many thanks Bernard....I am humbled

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 June 2020

God's compliment of heaven and we can imagine looking to the bed. You are wonderful observer. From room to room how an old man looks for a crumb you can brilliantly express. This poem makes us emotional. This is excellently penned...10

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Many thanks Kumarmaniji...I am humbled

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