Fatigue Comments

Well said, with lots of telling metaphors!

just so very good this one. gold! al

Chuck, an excellent write with effective imagery - our bodies fighting fatigue as if it were the enemy. Loved the line 'cells of resistance, a dogged persistance'. You created a wonderfully lethargic pace - how did you do that? ! Warm wishes, Justine.

I feel like this today. dan

Can feel those hands of fatigue all over me - 'cells of resistance' calls to mind freedom fighters, a great comparison! You've captured the essence of exhaustion here... zzz

Each year a new pain. Well over the hill. Fortunately the coffee still sits well. If not I would shoot myself. lol Good write on what ails us. Rusty