Fatigue Comments

Great Poem!

You've got the God gifted talent pf making us feel all you write about and also feel as if it were part of us too. That is the way one feels and knows the greatness of the talent and the comunicative wonder that it is. c

So true. Thank you for sharing x

I thought there are only three reasons because 'Or' has appeared two times in your poem but you have given several reasons. Whatever may be the case, I believe in the saying, 'Idle mind is the devil's workshop'

The causes of fatigue depicted in your poem are 100% true dear Irfan.

Nicely penned

Ah yes! Life is a very tiering and difficult problem, so very well expressed by this excellent poem.

Ah yes

This little poem provides three possible reasons of fatigue. Appreciated your keen observation. Top score.

True, Nosheen. Good poem. Touching the soul of the reader. Loved it.

So true.. well done.5*

I am feeling that right now Bravo!

A well penned, revealing poem

You are so right, particularly when you have nothing to do and your mind wanders negatively.