Saturday, June 12, 2010

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Beaches covered with sands of time-
Coast lines edges in scalloped design-
Lighthouse beams shine at whats left behind...
While the seas ebb and flow leave nothing to find;
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Roseann Shawiak 19 October 2013

Very heart wrenching, brought tears to my heart and eyes. Can feel your sadness. Thank you for sharing.

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Patricia Grantham 04 September 2013

A poem of great sadness and despair on a lonely beach with the sand. Thinking about a love that was lost and shedding tears. Into each life a little rain must fall. I have two poems titled Tear Drops and A Lovers Stroll, Please take a peek. Nice write.

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