Monday, June 28, 2021

Father's Day Comments

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For a believer,
A non-religious son is
Tension provider;
Here you stood with difference,
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Luis A. Estable 28 June 2021

You need to punctuate better. The form of poetry you chose has made for you a bit hard to write the verses with a better sense. There are some problems of meaning in this.

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