Father's Day Poem by Prem Nizar Hameed

Father's Day

Rating: 4.0


For a believer,
A non-religious son is
Tension provider;
Here you stood with difference,
Embracing freedom of choice;
Reminiscing your
Sweet memories, I humbly
Dedicate these lines:
Although you are far away
Your blessings always grace me

(A combination of two tanka in an acrostic form. Syllables: 5-7-5-7-7/5-7-5-7-7 and first letter of each line spells out: FATHERS DAY)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis A. Estable 28 June 2021

You need to punctuate better. The form of poetry you chose has made for you a bit hard to write the verses with a better sense. There are some problems of meaning in this.

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