Fathers, the men who are like a pen
We never can see whatever is going on inside them
But suddenly that pen is finished and then?
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I like your poem Ellias. Nicely expressed viewpoint of the man of the father. I would agree with your assessment. I don't know if you yourself are a father yet, but it sounds like you had some great role models to observe. I was not aware of the word tother. In the US, we don't use that term, so I had to look it up...other. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Ellias this is for me the best piece of work I have read from you so far, it is beautiful, understanding and from a perspective not many writers approach so I salute your skill and imagination for expressing this truth about so many good men. Amazing work! ! ! Your friend Jon
Beautifully said, Ellias. Wonderful poem. Fathers, we often only fully realise what they mean when we have to miss them Excellent.
Great job! You must be a good son of a good father.Because of your poem, fathers' gratitude is more grateful.Thanks for sharing this.
This is a good work, great meaning a nice tribute to all the real fathers out there
Yes u r right like always, we all from sky but in different weather
Yes...so great to appreciate the gratitude of fathers.. Unquestionable..perfect and so marvelous is the meaning.. Everyone should embrace your poem..Well Done!
Beautiful and moving, Ellias.