Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Fathers And Sons Comments

Rating: 5.0

A son sits by his father with questions in his eyes
The father looks down at his son, his pride he can't disguise.
There comes a time when every son must leave his father's care
and venture out into the world to see what happens there.
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Patricia Denise Newman
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Chinedu Dike 28 November 2022

Insightful line written with conviction

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Congratulations, dear poet. This poem is the POD member today. Good poem, deserves the recognition

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D.N. Rebb 25 November 2022

That is just so well written. And is true at any given generation. (my father to me or myself to my son; and so on) . It left me teary-eyed!

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 November 2022

Great poem! A well deserved POD. Well done x

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 November 2022

I love this thought-provoking piece Bravo Top 5

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John Brown 21 May 2015

What a lovely poem. I like this Patricia.

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