Sunday, October 1, 2006

....Fatherless Comments

Rating: 5.0

Me old man only ever eld me once
before he closed the door forever.
I always had hope in my other father
Santa, thinking he would love me more.
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Derek Haughton 21 December 2011

Some consistency needed, also an indication of the missing H, 'eld, 'opeless for instance, if opeless, why Hope. and He? Content very evocative!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 April 2008

nevertheless.........the endless longing.............

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Nalini Hebbar 01 October 2006

vincent...the missing 'H' intrigues...so you ate your father! ! ! ...lol...love...nalini

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Kelly Allen Vinal 01 October 2006

Sad but powerful piece, Vincent! Great therapy!

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