Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Fatherless Child Comments

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The seasons change and the time goes by
Father did you hear me calling for you?
Oh I cried a river for you...for many many years
It's almost as if you didnt hear
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dymon sidebottom 27 November 2009

thank u for the comment. and it is soo hard wenu no that there may be a chance ull go to sleep thinking ur dads fine and wake up and endless possibilities wuts wrong with him....i so can relate to how u feel i really enjoyed this poem

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Michael Gale 25 November 2009

A chapter unclosed is like a life's chapter left open as incomplete and empty. Great writing. God bless us all-MJG.

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Danny H 10 November 2009

This is very upsetting, and can make you seem like theirs a whole just erupting your chest. I hope someone or something replaces the emptiness. Best wishes Sara

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Steven Aragon 05 November 2009

Mos def can relate to this one. I loved 'you weren't there like a ghost; you haunted me' That image stuck out the most in my head reading the poem. very emotional.

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