Fatherless Child Comments

thank u for the comment. and it is soo hard wenu no that there may be a chance ull go to sleep thinking ur dads fine and wake up and endless possibilities wuts wrong with him....i so can relate to how u feel i really enjoyed this poem

A chapter unclosed is like a life's chapter left open as incomplete and empty. Great writing. God bless us all-MJG.

This is very upsetting, and can make you seem like theirs a whole just erupting your chest. I hope someone or something replaces the emptiness. Best wishes Sara

Mos def can relate to this one. I loved 'you weren't there like a ghost; you haunted me' That image stuck out the most in my head reading the poem. very emotional.