Thursday, June 16, 2016

Father We Are In Your Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh dear father, father of all
All creatures love you is true
You have made every day is nice
You remember and we remember you.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 June 2019

A glowing tribute as also gratitude for the almighty God, who is father of the universe, flows through out the melodious poem brilliantly. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 June 2016

Eternity is your identity in law! ! Praise to the Creator Almighty. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 27 June 2016

Mahakul has mastery in writing divine poems, what a great poet is he!

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Kishore Kumar Das 27 June 2016

An humble prayer to the Almighty nicely composed by you.......a glorious tribute on fathers' day...

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Nosheen Irfan 27 June 2016

You build heaven for us in love....a beautiful tribute to the father of all humanity. Since eternity we are of yours. Great write. Full marks.

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Randhir Kaur 20 June 2016

Since eternity we are of yours... Great dedication to a Father...Nice write as well Sir..

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Father you hold us in your lap To take us from this old world You teach secrets we learn too You build heaven for us in love. Your thoughts and praise of the eternal Father is wonderful. A full score for you Sir!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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