Oh dear father, father of all
All creatures love you is true
You have made every day is nice
You remember and we remember you.
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Eternity is your identity in law! ! Praise to the Creator Almighty. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Mahakul has mastery in writing divine poems, what a great poet is he!
An humble prayer to the Almighty nicely composed by you.......a glorious tribute on fathers' day...
You build heaven for us in love....a beautiful tribute to the father of all humanity. Since eternity we are of yours. Great write. Full marks.
Since eternity we are of yours... Great dedication to a Father...Nice write as well Sir..
Father you hold us in your lap To take us from this old world You teach secrets we learn too You build heaven for us in love. Your thoughts and praise of the eternal Father is wonderful. A full score for you Sir!
A glowing tribute as also gratitude for the almighty God, who is father of the universe, flows through out the melodious poem brilliantly. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.