Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Father To Son Comments

Rating: 5.0

My son,
What thoughts race through
My mind when I see you?
What do I feel when I see you?
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Lalay Allan
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Aziz Alkaabi 04 August 2009

This is a subtle language and some fine reflection on fatherhood.

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Catrina Heart 03 April 2009

Lovely piece of a father, touching poem...expressive with full of sentiments....Thanks 10

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