Father To A Son. Comments

A beautifully written poem about love for son.....thanks for sharing

when ever you need me just give me a call, for i will always be here for you until the end, because im more than just a father im also your friend....this is how father should treat a child when attains the age of maturity.. lovley father and fatherly advice we must seek and adhere to.... fine 10 read mine...smiley...kids....son...papa do u know...papa you too(reference for your poem)

You are surely going to be a dad of whom your son will be forever proud...

what alovely father nice piece, you son is lucky to have u, as i am cool man for a beutiful poem luwi

We find out who we really are when we see our reflection in someone we love deeply.

it is so meaningful..i bet this is how every father in the world feels..ur son is lucky to have u~

great title and ur son is proud to have dad like you 10++ Wonderful job

I like it. It has a great scheme and I love how the father feels towards his son, it's very heartfelt. You should make it longer I think you have a winning poem on your hands if you add to it a little more. Other then that your a great poet I love It! ! ! !

omigosh! my daddy is always saying that... yea that's right I teared up I like this line... when i look into your eyes i can see the sun shine

good poem it rhymes

I see how your family moulds your work, they are your inspiration and life. For that, there is no word to describe this, it is just simply a work from the heart

Sweet poem... a nice tribute.

very fine piece on Fatherly love.

Beautiful.... jose simply beautiful** lol

Beautiful sentiments, well written straight from the heart. Mo

this is one of the most passionate poems jose has ever written. i love it!

Another soulful tribute. Things that fathers don't often say. More of this is needed. GW62

aww this is soo sweet. ur a great father. love this one. definetely a 10

when i read this an image popped in my head of a mother father and son the day of his birth and so much pride and joy in their hearts...... amazing

it was a great poem, words are beautifully expressed