Wednesday, September 20, 2006
Father, Standing Comments
Rating: ★5.0
His fingers are brittle and yellow,
those veins are fat and nagging;
his hands are thick and rough,
and they shake when he speaks.
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Brian Dorn
24 September 2006
Powerful write, Melanie... the last two words speak volumes. Well done! ! Brian
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7/23/2025 4:57:10 PM # 1.0.0
A very compelling word portrait. Those last decisive words should blow all of your readers away. Write on, Melanie. Kindest regards, Sandra