Father Shouted Comments
"Go to hell, father shouted"
It was addressed to me no doubt
How was I to take his outburst?
Sometimes, I felt. It was needed or must
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A Nice Breath! Wilyne Belizaire9 hours ago Weird summary, I know, but I really felt like it was a nice breath to me, because this is an issue that I've been dealing with for a long time from my parents and it's nice to see the positive side to it! Enjoyed it! Keep writing! ! ! : -)
Oliver Sherman10 hours ago Great Sentiment, the grammatical errors interrupted the proper delivery of your theme. You have definite talent just tighten it up a bit.
CALVIN9 hours ago This poem is fine Comment +1 Great Sentiment
A lot of good advice here and should be well taken. Only I just wonder whether the youth of today will accept this piece of advice graciously. Written with experience and style.
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Jon ThElitepoet Crenshaw likes this. Jon ThElitepoet Crenshaw I enjoyed your piece Hasmukh...great advice for the young...well done sir. 26 minutes ago via mobile · Like