Thursday, June 9, 2016

Father's Voice Comments

Rating: 4.3

when he hid me under an umbrella
i heard the bearfooted rain teasing on his shoulder
that was my father's voice
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Bharati Nayak 18 July 2017

now he tells me his great honor i hear the passing years singing in the eyes of a father that is my father's voice now he dreams about another year i hear the coming dramas playing under the pen of a daughter that is also father's voice - - - - - - - - -The deep influence of your father on you is expressed so nicely in this beautiful poem.

0 0 Reply
Cigeng Zhang 21 July 2016

Loving voice, Father's Voice. Enjoyed reading.

0 0 Reply
Ernest Makuakua 09 June 2016

nice Anne beautifully now that was my fathers voice.

1 0 Reply
Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 June 2016

now he dreams about another year i hear the coming dramas playing under the pen of a daughter that is also father's voice A true ode to the venerable father. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing it. 10 marks. Thanks. Subhas

1 0 Reply
Anne Yun

Anne Yun

China
Close
Error Success