Saturday, July 13, 2013

Father's Father Comments

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my grandfather
on father's side

came from edinburgh.
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doug bentley
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Kim Barney 16 December 2015

Delightful poem, Doug! I never had the pleasure (yet) of meeting my father's father, nor my mother's mother. I look forward to doing so one day. I especially liked the ending to the poem: and, ever since then i've been haunted by images of a searing, blinding bat wings enfolded, hovering over my family just waiting to devour one more forgotten ancestor Very well done.

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Valsa George 03 August 2013

It is a delight going back to childhood memories! Those memories though fragmented they be, connect us to generations gone before! Enjoyed! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 July 2013

Father's Father is a poem of intimacy, respect, and love. Bridge still stands. I enjoyed the poem. Thank you.

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Heather Wilkins 13 July 2013

a good read about ancestors. yes one leaves and another appears.

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Richmond, British Columbia, Canada
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