Sunday, July 3, 2011

Father's Day Is Almost Done Comments

Rating: 5.0

Father's day is almost done;
His hair shines silver in the light:
His hands, frail, hold a book,
His smiles to see a bird in flight.
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Rani Turton
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 July 2011

Beautiful poem written well with nice texture and imagery. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4.

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