Saturday, October 3, 2015

Father's Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Those who plant seed
In every fertile hole
Then run at high speed
Oblivious of hurt soul,
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Bieze Josphat
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Chinedu Dike 11 February 2017

It quite easy to be a father, but to be a dad takes much more. An insightful poem elegantly brought forth in commemoration of father's day. Lovely piece nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Charity Nduhiu 03 October 2015

You have nailed it, so fathers do something the ball is on your side. Nice thought

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Rajnish Manga 03 October 2015

One should do his duty towards his family and the society to improve the quality of life all around. Thanks for this great poem with a purpose, especially on the occasion of Father's Day.

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