Sunday, October 19, 2014

Father Of The Bride Comments

Rating: 3.0

A gossamer vision you stand atop the stair.
Of this profound moment in time I'm acutely aware.
Gracefully down you glide, radiant, glorious, my daughter, the bride.
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Jeannette Heywood
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Khairul Ahsan 08 November 2014

I have just read this beautiful poem of yours. It gives a vivid picture of the emotions running through the mind of the bride's father when he gives away her daughter to the groom's hands, in marriage. I pity the wisdom of the reader who has rated this beautiful poem only 4/10. This certainly deserves double of that or more, perhaps.

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