Friday, June 5, 2015

Father Me, My Father Comments

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I know you have shortcomings to us
We had no bondings when I was a kid
You haven’t talked to much for your advices
I had little time to see when you go home
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Captain Herbert Poetry
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Ging Taping 06 June 2015

Many or some of us experienced the same.. Somehow I missed my father.. You said it well It moved me...

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Mr. M Jamal 05 June 2015

Moving poem. I was reading till the last line. You have described that feeling of affection in very few but perfect sentiment. Wonderfully crafted and penned :)

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