Father Like Son Comments

This poem is a big ole dose of strong feelings. Good job. Rachel

yo i luv thiz poem its almost like me and my dad lol gud poem

i think you did good on this poem, it shows what going on with your father and brother...nicely writtin

From ur poem i can see that ur father left you with ur mom and ran off so: Your anger is a gun, touch and it goes off, but leave it alone, although temptation is strong, and you wonder if you are wrong. You say it is ok, maybe it is not, you warn your bro, or is this not so.

i like the hint of emotion in the poem the anger its clear that there a little hate

i hope he doesnt grow up to be like him either. nice poem

i don't think he will 'butif u can get away when ur father is in one of those moods.