Monday, June 21, 2021

Father In A Frame-3rd June 2021 Comments

Rating: 4.9

Father!
You now sit
In your bedroom
Framed in a photo
...
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Bharati Nayak
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 04 October 2024

Bharati, Dear Old Dad must have been very dear to you. Nice Poem. Thanks for sharing. ;) bri

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David Wood 13 December 2021

A very heartfelt tribute to your father. He now lives in your thoughts and heart.

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Susan Williams 13 December 2021

this is a poem that draws the reader back again and again because the love in it makes the reader ache--they won't let me give you 5 stars again

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Susan Williams 21 October 2021

5 stars and to my fav list to perch along side other of your remarkable works!

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Soran M. H 18 October 2021

A kind and affectionate father, his memory remains in the heart of his daughter, a distinguished poet and a kind person, and most importantly, a philosophical question about death and life is raised in this poem that draws our attention. Thank you.

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Soran M. H 18 October 2021

It is three years since you left us But did you really leave? No, I don't believe.

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Soran M. H 18 October 2021

You show me the mango tree With ripe mangoes hanging Cut some guava of our garden And take me to the lawn With that pink rose bush at its edge

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 July 2021

he is always the hero in her life, a very touching poem, introvertly presented, but doubled the meaning of this. a myriad times. Tears rolling from my eyes, dear Bharati Poetess and I know Cuttack and I like the city very much.5 Stars fullest on Top for your very touching Ode to your beloved Dad

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 July 2021

Most beautifully worded and said, three YEARS? Looks like YESTERDAY, this a heart-wrenching poem, most fascinating Ode for your beloved Father, as for all daughters

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 July 2021

Typo; closure lines...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 July 2021

Beautifully written. To Poem List

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 July 2021

This poem resonates with me. The closurry lines are so heartfelt that they brought tears to my eyes

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 July 2021

A deeply touching and heartfelt write so simply crafted but of great depth.

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Reminiscence about your father has so touchingly been presented, precipitating the essence of a father's eternal love for his dear daughter

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M Asim Nehal 23 June 2021

Bharati ji how well you preserved those minute things in your memory. I am sure your father must be one in millions, a lucky man, to have a daughter like you. Heartfelt poem. Beyond ratings.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2021

A great tribute poem is very interestingly and excellently penned. Filial love is well expressed. An excellent tribute poem with deepest emotion is well penned.

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Varsha M 21 June 2021

Bharati this is beautiful. You have penned it so well. Indeed parents are our prescious treasure and. The memories with them the true elixir. It's a blessing to have parents all through our life but see the irony they have to depart in between. It was a blessing to read this.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 June 2021

Simply Bravo! I can't say anything else

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Kostas Lagos 21 June 2021

Wonderful poem Bharati!

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