Father Hear Me (C) 4-14-2010 Comments

Written from perspective. I can read about the senselessness of it all when the dying soldier still tries to rationalise his reasons for being there and losing it all in the process. In extreme difficulties we tend to turn to our Creator, sometimes after forgetting Him for so long. But He is always there. Thanks for this nice write.

this was really good i liked it alott! ! you have a great talent corey

Corey, Its good, I like it. It may be a little long for someone in desperate straits, but still I like. Keep up the good work, and I'm proud to have inspired you. For someone so young you are pretty close to what happens. Thanks for the invite. Your friend Lynn