With new hope blossoms flower
It spreads fragrances up to tower.
New smile and hope morning brings,
All get freshness with whole things.
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How to wish you God I do not know, We are following path as you show. We adore you offering flowers ever Beautiful! Those are also your creations favour.
Oh merciful father your love is eternal, We know this secret from our internal. All material relationships are perishable, You are permanent - Beautiful spiritual poem born of experience of life. loved this poem very very much dear poetess. tony
A nice God-fearing piece of Godly work, FATHER good Morning! Well done, Bhargabi!
Oh merciful father your love is eternal, We know this secret from our internal. All material relationships are perishable, You are permanent you do make us able. This praise is so beautiful beyond words. Beautiful. Thank you.
A Beautiful dedication to Almighty God. Very cool and pleasant prayer especially at morning sun rise, which will fill our day with positivity. Loved reading each lines. You have presented it so well...Thanks for sharing it.
Great poem of thanks and praises to God. We feel so inadequate when it comes to thanking God. You have expressed well in this beautiful rhymed lines. It is interesting to note that you call God, Father.
Supplication and praise to Lord Almighty....very nice thank u
This poem of yours is a gratitude to god and a prayer, perfectly rhymed and nicely structured, loved your poem mam, thanks for sharing :)
Indeed an excellent and soulful write. Enjoyed the reading. Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.
Scintillating erudition and expressive authenticity are, as judged from this write, the hall marks of your poetry madam Mahakul. Vast experience in life has enabled you to come out with this beautiful observation on life.
Blind man too feels reflections of rays/Bows before you to urge right he says....I totally agree with you dear madam, A fabulous poem. Top score and to my favourites!